At the end of the garden there’s a hole in my tree,
One time I walked there, just courage and me.
It’s dark and it’s scary, I wonder what’s there,
A hundred spiders and bugs every where.
I scratched in the dirt and leaves on the ground,
And hardly believe what my toys and I found.
A well trodden path leads to the mouth of the cave,
I take a deep breath and try to be brave.
With hands on my knees and neck stretched out low,
I smell fungus and leaves, and damp things that grow.
There’s a horrible sound, it scares me a lot,
I look in my hands to see what I’ve got.
I throw Action Man in and Spiderman too,
Then pull down my pants and go to the loo.
I put my face to the hole and look in the tree,
My toys are gone, my hands are now free.
I push away cobwebs and long stems of grass,
Can’t wait to tell this to all of my class.
I know I will see something, ugly and bad,
Very angry and hairy, a bit like my Dad,
I let out my breath and pick up a stick,
I’m so frightened and shaking, it makes me feel sick.
I give the monster a poke, it lets out a cackle,
I get ready to grab it and give it a tackle.
I touch something smooth and a little bit soft,
I’m not sure but I think, I heard the thing cough.
A cackle, a crow, and a flurry of feathers,
It’s in there for sure, away from the weather.
The monster it’s gone, my grab gets thin air,
But I see something else, hiding in there.
Some leaves and some grass, all soft like a bed,
And nestled inside, a warm speckled egg.


Dec 15, 2012 @ 15:58:46
Excellent read, makes you want to know what is there and so it draws your further in, in anticipation of what is this small child is looking at or for, with intense determination.
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:03:23
I’ve always had a thing for nests and collecting eggs. Glad you enjoyed. I wrote it for my boys a few years ago.
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:11:55
I’m sure they loved it. It so reminds me of one of all time Children’s books, come lately a movie…Where the Wild Things Are
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:19:50
One of my all time favourites! Good old Maurice Sendak!
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:22:25
Yes Mam…my favorite line “Max, I could eat you up, I love you so!”
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:26:02
Well it is an unbelievable compliment to be mentioned in the same sentence as him. Perhaps I need to get some drawing done now!
Love that line too!
Dec 15, 2012 @ 16:31:34
It was the first book I was giving along with Curious George when I first came to the states…along with a slew of Paddington Bears that flew with me from Bermuda, of which only two remain and I still have to this day in mint condition. I gave them to my Daughter and now I will hand them on to my Granddaughter.
Dec 15, 2012 @ 22:38:05
I’m like that with books. It’s impossible to throw away the well loved ones!
Dec 16, 2012 @ 00:27:20
yep agreed
Dec 15, 2012 @ 23:50:03
I enjoyed the prose; it brings you straight back to childhood. Good work.
Dec 16, 2012 @ 00:15:48
Why thank you kind sir!
Dec 16, 2012 @ 00:21:13
You enabled me to reflect, I sincerely appreciate it.
Dec 16, 2012 @ 00:24:29
Ha ha…it’s nice to go back. I wrote this for my boys (I have 4) a few years ago. I think children love things that have suspense and are a bit scary…even when they are little!
Dec 16, 2012 @ 00:26:24
Yes they do, suspense builds character, great way to harness this ability.
Dec 16, 2012 @ 09:13:10
Nicely done!
Dec 17, 2012 @ 11:24:21
This felt like a moment back in time. It brought back the memories. And what a fabulous write.
Dec 17, 2012 @ 11:25:50
You say the nicest things!
Dec 18, 2012 @ 07:00:17
kids and their explorations!